I thought I'd better post the alternative ending, before too many of my friends think I'm feeling totally depressive. Mostly the opposite really, not manic, but elated! However, this is not the "director's cut." I've limited it to the last 2 lines of the last verse as it's only the last line that is different.
I nearly published this version instead last week, but ...
Hope
...
Now purpose is my guide.
From one small scrap inside.
August 2007
I prefer the other line, although I like the alternative graphic.
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